Treviabot92-Virstein's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kirby Gourmet Race Metal]

Personally, I think your pedal hat cymbal is a tad bit higher than it should be, but that aside, nice job.

[Mute City (From the Stands)]

I dunno what the hell you people are talking about, the buildup's only around thirty seconds! What's wrong with that?

Yeah, it could use a little more oomph in the actual song, perhaps a rock cover (like what I did on mine, but with all those cheering and mechanical sounds you put here). But overall, it's good. I don't really see a problem.

[{Elysium} RMX]

This is really good. I forgot when I first favorited it, but it was a long while back, definitely when I was still in high school. The Audio Portal definitely didn't look like it does now. It's songs like these that inspire me to cover music, and to try making my own.

There's just one thing I noticed in this particular remix that's off. Don't get me wrong, it doesn't bring the song down one bit, it's just that minor that it doesn't really need to be bothered with. There's one note in the main melody that's off, the second one from the beginning of said melody. The way you have the melody, it starts at C-sharp, then goes up an octave on the third note to the next C-sharp (which is how the melody is, it goes up an octave on the third note). That being said, the second note should also be C-sharp, but you have it at F-sharp. Again, it's really minor, and you don't need to bother with it, but I thought you'd like to know.

Now, obviously, you've been active since this song, because you have songs going out to 2009, but you need to come back, man! Make some more for '13! Don't stop, man, because you've got talent and it rocks (song lyric pun intended)

-Michael Moynihan

[Guitar vs. Piano Remix v1.1]

Not bad at all. I liked how you made the guitar deviate just a little from the original melody, how the piano went along that melody and even emphasized the lower notes, and also how at the end, you raised the melody up a few notes. However, I'm sorry, but I just don't hear this bass line that you're talking about. Were the lower notes just supposed to pop out more here?

Anyways, good work. You might consider hitting up my latest remake of GvP 1.2, which has a tad bit more noticeable bass line.

[Jackie Chan music]

Dude, I could swear I've heard this before...Wait, I have! Oh shit, it was on a cheap Wii game called BattleRage, it was the title music! The game came out about two years after you submitted this!...You know, I don't think they ever credited you.

[Guitar Vs. Piano [aG Remix]]

I also think it'd be a good idea to revisit this, especially if you still have the .flp that this is saved on. This could sound a lot better if you got a later version of FL Studio, like 10, for example.

That aside, it sounded real good. Well done.

[TTFAF 8 Bit Edition]

Very badly done. At the very least, you didn't just replace the instruments like so many other people here, but it still sounded like shit because of the poor quality.

[Mario Paint - TtFaF]

I never liked Mario Paint music to begin with, and frankly, this was just plain badly done. Once again, I have to listen to a fucking MIDI RIP!!!